Thanks mang! I appreciate the review! Sorry about being so slow getting back to you, I'm just getting settled in from a move so I haven't had much time for interneting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope I can get off my ass and add more to the story though. Anyway, I hope to return the favor pretty soon and review one of your pieces as soon as I get a chance! And I agree, not enough noir on here.

Hello, P f White. And yes, I have taken interest into Of and On Ned Moon. I think that you should do you story part by part, unless of course if it is a short story. You can just come and read my short stories some time tonight and I am posting one of them into a contst. If I am lucky, I could get published, so wish me luck I look forward to seeing more of Of and On Ned Moon! Take care

Hello, P. F. White. Before I read your work, what happened to your longer story, which was over 10,000 words? You can tell me on my scratchpad You can also come read and comment on my works. Just tell me!