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On Broken Hands, by Paul Ciaccio: Thanks again to everyone for the input.
I went ahead and posted the song version of "BH"
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On Broken Hands, by Paul Ciaccio: Great call, when we recorded the song we cut the last two
lines in each verse.
It gave it a much better flow.
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On No Room, by Connie: I really like what you have to say in this poem.
It seemed to flow a little better after i split the lines
up some.
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