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On The Saga of Harold, by Nathan P.: The description of a dream is an excellent way to introduce a
narrative. For one thing, it liberates your imagination and let... » Read more...
On Win Some, Lose Some, by F. Spike: A great idea and great execution. I loved your creation of
Mr. Hage, a gambling thrill vampire, as it were, who fe... » Read more...




