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Hey thanks for critiquing my poem! Disguise of Hatred isn't one of my greatest accomplishments, and you can definitely tell by how people are reacting to it, haha, so it's good to know that there are those that DO appreciate it! It is a very emotional poem and I'm glad you could connect with it! Thanks again!
Sorry for the confusion.. Go to the forums, under Community, and read the thread called "June:A Challenge." That should clear it up. Feel free to read my other entries.
I see you've posted some more. I don't have time to read anything tonight, but I'll definitely be back tomorrow with my thoughts. Just thought I'd let you know
Thanks for the critiques You need to post something else so I can critique back again
Name: Payge
Sex: Female
Location: "Wherever I May Roam"
Words Written: 994
Hottest Words: learned, heart, memories, mind, sunlit, love
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About Me

About Me: Hi, nice to meet all of you people ^-^! I write A LOT of poetry in my free time (I have over 100) and I don't think any of them are any good, but if you like them please tell me.

It is my dream to one day publish a book or two of my poems. I also want to go to college and become a marine mammologist, or one who studies marine mammals (because I love dolphins XD).

I like A LOT of different types of music, not even kidding.

Anyways, that's about me.
Interests: Dolphins/sea creatures, Poetry, Writing, Music, and a bunch of other stuff XD
Publications: None
Favorite Books: Too many to list XD
Favorite Movies: Too many to list, but scary movies are my favorite...
Favorite TV Shows: Family Guy, House, How It's Made, Spongebob Squarepants (who doesn't like spongebob?), American Idol, America's Got Talent, Don't Forget the Lyrics, Are You Smarter Than a Fifth Grader?, So You Think You Can Dance, Deal or No Deal, and a bunch of others XD
Favorite Quotes: "If the world didn't suck, we'd all fall off", "What dod you do when the only one who can make you stop crying is the one who made you cry?", "If I had a dime for every time you made me smile, I'd be rich. Likewise, If I had a dime for every time you made me cry, I'd be rich too", "All's fair in love and war"
Loves: Poetry, Reading, Singing, Playing the flute/tenor saxophone, Soccer, Volleyball, Origami, Making things, Listening to music, Writing, and that's all I can think of right now XD
Hates: Being alone, Being forgotten, Friends who turn on her, Fakes, and everything in that category...

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This is sort of written in the point of view of a preschooler. I don't know...that's just how I came up with it. » Read...
These poems have no real specific order except for the order in which I wrote them. I can't even remember that so i will just be posting all the poems I know need to go in this work. Enjoy. » Read...

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On What Fell From Heaven, Chapter 1: Fire and Water, by Jay Davis:  Your title is wonderful! It's very appealing and draws the reader to your story. My only probems were that you miss... » Read more...
On June Challenge, Chapter 3: June 8-10, by dnmtwthlsrbm:  I love your entires but I am so confused. Do any of these entries have anythignn to do with each other? I just don'... » Read more...
On Mere Words, by Kathleen Dineen:  The title caught my attention, but after reading the poem, I find it to be unfitting. You only say "mere words" once wh... » Read more...
On Red Shirt, by Shane Gannaway:  I think your poem is very...unfinished. There are many ways you could rework it to make it so muc more flowing but stil... » Read more...
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