The Jeremy Files, Chapter 4: No One Understands
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poetry, love, sad, friendship
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This is a series of poems I wrote while being depressed. Just so you know, an ex-friend of mine is named Jeremy and he caused my depression...
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A poem I wrote...very depressing...
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No one knows the tears I shed
The sadness that fills the void
No one knows the darkness I see
While I stain the carpet dark red
Inside my broken, whittled heart
All the love has been trashed
Torn into little tiny pieces
Then strewn apart
No one understands how much I want to die
How much I dream that makes me cry
No one knows how many times I’ve died inside
How everytime I love, it’s a lie
No happiness can come through this dark wall
Fear and untrusting feelings attack my soul
Can you understand now? Can you feel my pain?
I doubt you could, even if you saw me bawl
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