On A Beautiful Mess, by RLyn:  Hey RLyn, While your story is full of allure and intrigue thanks to fanciful description, the beginning itself leaves m... » Read more...

On Leaves, by Arday Urthona:  Wow, reminiscence of Edgar Allen Poe.  Keep writing, look forward to reading more!   ... » Read more...

On Moving Target, by Laurie Paulsen: Themes  The questions are poignant.  But what is the importance of "arriving in the light or dark"?  I think ... » Read more...