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On Scene from a Hotel Room, by Kieran Thomson: When i read the first sentence i knew it was going to be
good. Very good description. i liked the attitude of
the... » Read more...
On The Drunk Dial, by Lacie Summers: Mesmerizing lights? (ugh, strobe lights)
I think The Drunk Dial title has little to do with the...
fear and pain ... » Read more...
On Why I didn't finish my essay on time., by Brittany: You turned in a late essay but
had time to write this to go with it? Overall, very cute and
I liked that it was short.&... » Read more...




