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On Scene from a Hotel Room, by Kieran Thomson: When i read the first sentence i knew it was going to be good.  Very good description.  i liked the attitude of the... » Read more...
On The Drunk Dial, by Lacie Summers: Mesmerizing lights?  (ugh, strobe lights)  I think The Drunk Dial title has little to do with the... fear and pain ... » Read more...
On Why I didn't finish my essay on time., by Brittany: You turned in a late essay but had time to write this to go with it?  Overall, very cute and I liked that it was short.&... » Read more...