Thank you for the comment on my story. I have a problem with pacing, I'm either too slow or too fast. I appreciate the input.

Hi Tea'a! Are we going to get to see some of your work on the site soon?

You're very welcome. Let me know if you have any questions.
-Ben

thanks heaps for the critique!!!
im trying to get this story prefect and have a good feeling about it your critique was very kind and added to my confidence of it, plus the things you pointed out were very helpful as i didn't notice them before!
thanks again

-Sophie

Hi Rachelle! Glad to see you've already gotten started with a critique.

Since you've joined the "Newbie Enabler" circle, and written out a (quite long! good job) critique, I'll send you some shiny karma to help you get started on putting your own works up here.

Welcome to the site, by the way!

Thank you for critiquing Neverland. I appreciate the time you took to read the chapter and write the critique. I hope you come back and read more once I finally get some posted.

Your welcome, a hello is the least that i can do

Hello and welcome to scribophile