well, as you read in my poem, I TOTALLY agree! I feel like it's become a bad thing to have fun anymore, or to have an imagination. I'm glad you liked the poem and thanks for the critique!

Hello, Rhema! I liked your story"Track Shoes!" Maybe you should read some stories from my profile. Just click my name, scroll down to recently published works and you will see Heart of Ice. Read and comment on it, Become a fan if you want! Take care and I hope you enjoy!

Wow, I feel like a loser commenting so much but I love the Gilmore Girls!

Oh- and when you said to describe the fans' disinterest in the concert, I had before, but someone told me to take it out because it was too much. I guess sometimes I either don't describe enough or describe too much! So that's what I'll be working on...

Well, anyway, thanks!

Hey Rhema Amachigh- thanks for critiquing my story! I found it helpful and I'll work on it more today