Hey! This is literally like 2 months overdue. I just wanted to thank you for critiquing Immortal Child: Playing Games. You caught some good stuff - I'm currently working on revising it. Thanks again! (and may I add, you have a gorgeous smile!)

Thanks for critiquing my story. I really appreciate it and I'll keep what you said in mind. I've already made some corrections.

Thanks for your review of my story. I've had that posted for two years on another writing web-site, received in excess of thirty reviews, and not gotten as much valuable feedback as you just gave me in one critique. Thanks for the time. I'll certainly be making some changes based on your suggestions.

I just noticed we have two of the same favorite books and are both English majors

Thanks! I like him an awful lot too. ^_^

Thanks for your critique! I'm working on editing the first chapter, should be up tonight. I'm looking forward to seeing your critique of the 2nd chapter, as well - I need help with it!

Have a great day!

Actually, my profile pic is Kenshin, from the anime Rurouni Kenshin (also known as Samurai X)

Hey, RLyn! Do you wanna read any of my works? Just feel free to write on my scratchpad! I haven't heard from you in a while!

Yo, RLyn! I've published a song called "Lonely Heart." Come check it out.
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did I seriously get it right!? my god my comprehension sucks! woot for me . I'm sorry to hear about your friend, and that's terrible . I fell in love with a woman who met the same fate and she ignored my love up until she became addicted, then she wouldn't get off of me. It was a terrible haunting memory: to fall in love with someone but have my heart broken and have it rubbed in my face that I would never have her again. But 'nuff about me, I sympathize for you sincerely. I'm glad I can at least make you smile .