I enjoyed your work, "In The Distance!" You're officially the first writer I've critiqued on here, so pardon if it's a bit sketchy =) Oh, and feel free to critique my critique, haha! Nice to meet'cha!

Thanks for reading and commenting on my short story. I appreciate your thoughts and will take them into consideration.

Hey! This is literally like 2 months overdue. I just wanted to thank you for critiquing Immortal Child: Playing Games. You caught some good stuff - I'm currently working on revising it. Thanks again! (and may I add, you have a gorgeous smile!)

Thanks for critiquing my story. I really appreciate it and I'll keep what you said in mind. I've already made some corrections.

Thanks for your review of my story. I've had that posted for two years on another writing web-site, received in excess of thirty reviews, and not gotten as much valuable feedback as you just gave me in one critique. Thanks for the time. I'll certainly be making some changes based on your suggestions.

I just noticed we have two of the same favorite books and are both English majors

Thanks! I like him an awful lot too. ^_^

Thanks for your critique! I'm working on editing the first chapter, should be up tonight. I'm looking forward to seeing your critique of the 2nd chapter, as well - I need help with it!

Have a great day!

Actually, my profile pic is Kenshin, from the anime Rurouni Kenshin (also known as Samurai X)

Hey, RLyn! Do you wanna read any of my works? Just feel free to write on my scratchpad! I haven't heard from you in a while!

Yo, RLyn! I've published a song called "Lonely Heart." Come check it out.
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did I seriously get it right!? my god my comprehension sucks! woot for me . I'm sorry to hear about your friend, and that's terrible . I fell in love with a woman who met the same fate and she ignored my love up until she became addicted, then she wouldn't get off of me. It was a terrible haunting memory: to fall in love with someone but have my heart broken and have it rubbed in my face that I would never have her again. But 'nuff about me, I sympathize for you sincerely. I'm glad I can at least make you smile .

hey no problem ! most people ignore me when i critique them

A poem is what you make of it, I say. You just have to fool everyone in to believing that and you'll have a poem! Move the lines into stanzas, ditch the grammar (or keep if it you like!), don't worry about trying to make it rhyme, it's just kinda nice, not necessary. Give it a shot, throw it up here, see what people think, and go from there! If people tear it apart, well whatever, it's not their work . You'll never know if you don't try .

You wrote a poem and then deleted it. I must ask: why? I hope it wasn't because you thought it was crappy.

hey thanks for the critique, once again! yeah, no offense but I'm not entirely sure what you meant there, haha! I don't count syllables when I write rhymes, I just write it and sort of sing it to myself to see if it fits, so the syllables probably don't match up cuz I just sang it in my head. At any rate, much appreciated! I like reading your critiques, they make me feel good, haha!

It's not easy to understand autism, so knowing what it feels like isn't easy. Which is why I admire people who are patient enough to work with people who have autism.

haha, easy, easy! my head's getting too big for this room

I don't think my other message posted, and I don't remember what I wrote, but it was something along the lines of: wow! I have a fan! And thanks for reading my work, I'm glad you liked it! I thought it was too morbid, I guess not . And I'm glad you liked the other one too! More poems to come when the karma lets me . I look forward to hearing from you again, and look forward to reading some more of your work as well! Keep in touch!

I loved your story in the Jaws! go and see the critique that I have give to you!

Thanks for your critique! It was really helpful. I edited the piece a bit if you're interested.

Absolutely. You are already a good writer, and more than that, there's something I can see in your writing that tells me you're going to be even greater.

not at all, any and all criticism is greatly appreciated. thanks agian