Good Morning Ron,
A. You are a wonderful set of eyes to have on my work, I'm grateful
B. There is no ring writing, sir, you are a fantastic writer! *bows in the presence of talent*
Have a flippin' awesome day, dude.

Gotcha, this will be fun!

Hey! Thanks for the crit and your good advice, as always I esp. like that you told me to have Hector say somethig clever and manly with the knife at Haggle's throat. That was right on target. Now if I can just be clever and manly??? Hmmm.

Haha! I have a picture of my other dog that looks strangely like yours (except he's a black lab). Same toothy (upside down) grin. (Mine doesn't have the cute tongue though!)

Having said what you said on Ch 1 P2 of 2 ... would you be willing to read 'the end of the 2nd part (Ch. 10!) for me? Via email if you're willing. I'll explain all via email.

why thank you :] yours is priceless i must say

Hey!
I was out of town until this morning so I'm sooo behind on my crits! Yikes. Ten is ready but I hate to post til I catch up on other's crits. Don't want to be piggy about feedback, ya know?

Anyone that calls my work sexy in the first/opening chapter deserves a gift!!!

Thanks for the critique. I keep having to remind myself when I write that I should actually pay attention to what I'm doing (I usually just write and post). Thoughtful critiques like this help me to remember that. Thanks.

No problem. Enjoyed your poems.