On Flock, by Mr. Croup: Hey Man... Bro... ManBro,   All in all I really liked the work.  I think it would be better if that first paragraph... » Read more...

On The Comforts of Fiction, by K. McCrae: I'm really really surprised that I am the first one to say anything.  Well Meghan, don't fret.  I know how ... » Read more...

On Tomorrow, by Wren Smit: "Hey KT--- Just letting you know I read it and am thinking about it right now. I'll have a critique for you soon!"  ... » Read more...

On The Last Noel, by N. Adam Edwards: I don't really know how to critique a screen play, much less one that has already been made into a movie, but I feel like... » Read more...

On Hamm, by Manfred Tooley: Hey, So I know in the e-mail you said you were interested in the narrative style. All in all I liked the story, though the fo... » Read more...

On Red Shirt, by Shane Gannaway: Shane!  I really like this poem, but I think I might be reading it wrong.  Either way I really like the way I'm... » Read more...

On Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz:  I really liked this poem, even more so in its original formatting.  When I read it I could hear you reading it at ... » Read more...

On Untitled Story 1, by Carrie Griffin:  Hey Carrie, I just want to start by saying I really liked this story (lots of people seem to start with that so why not... » Read more...