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Hi Russell,

Good to see you back around! How's things been?
Russell, thanks for another helpful and insightful critique. I will definitely take the suggestions you have given under consideration when I get a chance to make more rounds of revisions to the piece. Thanks for taking the time to give such good suggestions.
No hurry, no worry, Russell. I enjoyed reading your work and I'm pleased you found the comments useful!
Russell, thanks for the insightful critique. Your comments were right-on, and I will consider the suggestions you have given. The detailed suggestions and evaluation are encouraging. I appreciate you taking the time to give such a thorough, effective critique.
Really?! That would be amazing *^-^* I'd really appreciate getting a critique from you, but I'll understand if you can't. All of my graduate friends have disappeared from our usual online functions. They may be better off for it, though. Scribophile's been monopolizing all of my online time >.>
Russell, I've read a few of your critiques! You're very good at what you do. Where'd you go? --Little
Understood - I've been swamped too but managing to keep my head above water!

Glad you're back!
Welcome back! I was wondering what happened to you.
Hey, I'm waiting for another Chapter in Orphans. I need a good read. It's not nice to be so mean to your fans...
Thanks for your comments Russell. Lots of helpful input. I've actually re-written Winter Hunt in first person from the POV of the vampire. Everyone seems to indicate the story needs a bit more mystery/edge to it and I think the change of voice might do it. Always a pleasure hearing from you!
Name: Russell Nakamura
Sex: Male
Location: Los Angeles, CA
Birthday: Feb 20, 1978
Words Written: 4,931
Other Networks: Facebook

About Russell

Occupation: Budget Coordinator, Getty Publishing
About Me: I'm not really a writer. I just try to live life and report back.
Interests: Science, economics, theology, travel, cooking, social outings, most adventure sports, and 90s music.

Publications: Nothing worth mentioning
Favorite Books: Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil
The English Patient
The Hours
The Unbearable Lightness of Being
Atonement
Favorite Movies: Blade Runner
Raiders of the Lost Ark
Vertigo
Army of Darkness
Point Break
Courage Under Fire
The Shawshank Redemption
Favorite TV Shows: The Simpsons
Jeopardy
Twin Peaks
Favorite Quotes: "The knowledge of good and evil seems to be the aim of all ethical reflection. The first task of Christian ethics is to invalidate this knowledge." - Dietrich Bonhoeffer
Loves: Banana cream pie
Hates: Cold floors

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Mrs. Dalloway The Sea Atonement The Perfect Storm: A True Story of Men Against the Sea (P.S.) Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil Perfume: The Story of a Murderer

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On The Box, by Dallas: Hi Dallas, Here are some notes on this work. Forgive me if I'm repeating comments from other critiquers. Naomi sat down ... Read →
On Breath (revised), Chapter 2: Breath, by Firejade: Hello, I'm back. Just wanted to finish: Jim strolled down the lane in the Georgia heat, swinging his arms around his bod... Read →
On Breath (revised), Chapter 1: Breath [reworked], by Firejade: Hi there, Hoping to add a few thoughts. Forgive me if they've been already been mentioned:   Chemotherapy left blis... Read →
On Suberfuge, Chapter 1: Subterfuge, by Sarnia: He slit the envelope with a letter opener. He was impressed. The paper was fine quality linen, marbled like the unfranked mat... Read →