Hey Rusti - haven't seen you around in a while! Where ya been? How's the stuff with Publishing America going?

Hey! I wriote the second chapter of "A Thirst For Revenge"! Will you please read and critique it?? PLEASE! I've been trying to get it on here for months, but it kept saying I didn't have enough karma points!
Please read it!

Rusti, I just wanna give a shoutout to you on getting published! Big, big, big cheers 2 U!

Congrats on getting published! That's really terrific!

Hello, Rusti. As I said before, you can comment on my works if you want!
P. S. I will get to critiquing your work as soon as possible! I hope that you like my stories!

Why did you delete most of your work?

Hello, Rusti! Do you wanna read some of my works sometime? Just tell me on my scratchpad. I have a work for you to read called Passions of a Tempted Kind of Angel: Sinclair's Story. and read My Boyfriend's A Vampire. Both are romantic so maybe you would like them. Take care

thank you VERY much for your kind words and help-- I appreciate you noting the spelling error as well!! Glad you liked!! HUGZ

The boy in your picture reminds me a lot of Sesshomaru from the popular anime show "Inuyasha". lol

Thanks for the response to my intro. I'm off to see what you've written. Feel free to check out my writing - I'm specifically looking for input on "Smile."
Happy writing,
-dnm

Thank you.

Thanks for becoming a fan. Did you read my work? How did you come across me?

Yeah thanks a lot I read it, I was just finishing dinner and I plan on reading your stories soon. And trust me I was afraid of the reaction of it too, hoping it won't be too negative or awkward.

Hello, I read your post on my thread and I published one of my "Erotic" stories on here a second ago, I thought maybe you'd like to exchange critiques. I'll read a couple of your stories and hope fully you'll read too. Thanks a lot.

hey... i dont think i will publish anything to scribophile for a bit, since i have reached my basic membership limit of 5 works, but if you want to recieve any coming chapters to any of my works, email me (email's on my profile now) and let me know! thanks, ~Fainne

Wanna read my short story, Passions of Lovestruck.. Tempted Kind of Angel, Rusti? You are welcome to come on my profile and read it!

Congrats on your novel, Rusti!

Hello! When you have time please read, The Boys of Summer -and tell me what you think.

thank you so much for reading my new works. thats all!

read my poem- Lost Sister
its not a sad poem-its quite pretty
but its about my sister who died at birth

read the Chronicles of Odralon and tell me what you think! not sure whether its gonna be a novel or shorter novella...
~Fainne

Its hard to convey something physical over a e-post it, but ill try.

A sword in it self does not lend it self to a style of use per say. If you give an Italian a sword, and a Spaniard the same sword, both of them will use it differently. There are some things however that on base level effect how a sword should be used.

The sword of Darkness in question.

It has no hand protection, so in a dual type situation. That is, where you would be facing off against someone, with onlookers and thus wanted to be honorable. You would want to hold your hand as far away from your opponent. A classic way of doing this was just hold it straight over your head. Imagine the statue of liberty, except with a sword. Another way would be to hold it cocked back behind yourself

Another cool feature of the SOD is the Quillions. The U shaped thing around the grip. You can really lock up blade there. Easily capturing your enemies sword.

Thanks for the critique, its so nice to see at least someone has read my work

I am a little confused by what you mean when you say the "Sword of darkness". I googled it, and do you mean the design by Kit Rae

yes, the 3rd chapter is coming soon, working on it constantly.

thanks so much for the critique! i see what you mean about the time and place- most people have said that and i am working to correct that. also i am changing a little of the POV so the beginning is a little less confusing.
~Fainne
ps: there's going to be a little light romance later on starting in the 3rd chapter

Hi Rusti,

Sorry you didn't win the contest. I actually thought your poem was better than mine. I guess it depends who gets out and votes. Better luck next time. You still rock!

hey rusti! you give such good critiques and people always say good things about your qork- would you be so kind as to read my work: Island Conspiracy (prologue, chapters 1+2) and give me some feedback?
~Fainne

hey, woman!
thank you for your fabulous comments on my werewolf western! i'll be sure to fix that spelling error when i edit.
what a lovely way to start my saturday.

Hello Rusti! Maybe you should come by my profile today and read Heart of Ice again!

hi, rusti--
me, again.
i just saw your website! your experience and accomplishments are impressive--and there's no such thing as a 'lowly' romance writer. pshaw.
writing about love is difficult. if you can do it well, kudos to you--not many people can communicate their heart's expression.

Hey Rusti thanks for Joining GLC. i know science fiction can seem a little alien(sorry for the pun) when your new to it i always thought you could not write science fiction if you did not know advanced science as i read more i realized if you have a sense for the imaginative you will do just fine.

hi, rusti--
gosh, thanks for the glowing critique! i hope to return to that story someday, and answer some of those questions about the why and where (and when)...geez, a lotta questions left open, huh?
i'm so pleased you enjoyed the story, and grateful for your comments. thanks!

Thanks for the review on Thieves, CHP 3. -me give you pointers on thrillers -shucks ma'am, your making me blush. My favorite authors are Dan Brown, Micheal Crichton and James Rollins. They are the one's that could help you most. But I will help in any way I know how.

Got this piece I wrote called Sad woman's Blues. Check it out if you like. Peace out!

Thanks for the critique for East of the Sun, the fairy tale is also one of my favorites, and I pretty much love the Golden Compass for alluding to it. Also, I am kind of into the jazz rendition, so I'm pretty in love with it. I'll hop on over when it's completed to let you know

Thanks for all your reviews! I've got A Little Birdie Told Me on my reading list. If I can get my internet to stay connected long enough when I get home at night I might just get to read it.

Hey, Rusti. I have published Broken Hearts Chapt 2 for you on my profile? I have a question, I am trying to find another author on my story Broken Hearts. Your stories and mine both have a potential to be bestsellers. I also have a publishing site called dorrance publishing. So can you?

Thank you for the critique on my Valentine's Head story. I appreciate your time and comments.
-Ben

Hi, I sent you a message rather than write on your scratch pad but I don't think you got it. Anyway, I was wondering what program you used on your web site? I also wanted to know how much it cost to build and maintain a site like yours?

I have written the prologue and first chapter of my story called Broken Hearted on my profile! Read them today!

Thank you very much for the thoughtful input on my poem. Take care

I have published the first part of Sink Your Teeth Into Romance if you want to read it!

Thank you for critiquing Heart Break 2! I am actually trying to publish this as a possible bestseller. My next story is Heart Break 3: Sink Your Teeth In Romance about a girl romancing a vampire who is like te perfect gentleman but inside loves her for her blood. Try to read Heart Break (THe first one) today and tell me what you think!

I loved you story, Heart Throb, Rusti! I wish you good luck for the february contest!
P. S. I wish to hear more from you and read my works sometime!

Rusti,

Would it be okay if I asked you technical and monetary questions about your website? I'm interested in starting my own but have no idea of what it takes.

Thanks for your kind words about my works. Sorry if my last critique was so long winded. I meant to tell you that I also liked the red head convention part in Cyber Fantasy.

You may call me Dylan if it's okay with you. Everyone who knows me, even the people who work for me, calls me by my first name. I understand that It's what you feel comfortable with though. So it's up to you.

When's the next short story coming out?

Hi, what's up? This is Brittany_Jasper's Appeaser. Loved your new work!

Thanks for the comments - I didn't mean to scare you, but I'm glad you enjoyed it
I will see if I can smooth it out a bit and improve the grammar and phrasing.

Strange! I do have two private works: the ones titled Lessons from Elijah, and Invisible Hamsters. You should be able to read Tocana Nights, or my four poems... Otherwise it must be a problem with Scribophile!

Hey! I'm really liking your Sensuous Snowflakes so far... so excuse my inner editor -- she likes to get picky when commenting. Just wanted to stop by and say hello.

Do you know of Firstwriter.com? Its a great site that emails you writing competitions and new agents. I enter contests while contacting agents. I'm trying to sell a crime thriller and I've been turned down like a gazillion times -I've stopped counting. Check out the site though and never give up your passions!

Rusti, you have the name, look and writing style of a romance writer. When's your first big contract?

Rusti Fae,

I liked your story Heartthrob. Keep it up! Oh also, when you get the chance read my novel Carmine Being and The Midnight Rose Chapter 1 and the preview,

From
The Romance Novel Circle Owner
Ariadne President