Scribophile

Ryan R. Fennell
11 • Scribbler

Ryan R. Fennell
Become a fanBecome a fan
Give him a giftGive him a gift
Send him a messageSend him a message
« Back to Ryan R. Fennell's profile

All Critiques and Comments

Showing 2 of 2 critiques and comments.
On Thanks Dad, by Joshua Burgess:  I think the descriptions in this story are so well placed and vivid.  I loved the line in the opening paragraph&nb... » Read more...
On Grandad's Toolbox, by Joshua Burgess: Opening Comments  First I want to say that I could see every moment throughout the story.  I saw the basement and ... » Read more...