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On Thanks Dad, by Joshua Burgess: I think the descriptions in this story are so well placed
and vivid. I loved the line in the opening
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On Grandad's Toolbox, by Joshua Burgess: Opening Comments
First I want to say that I could see every moment
throughout the story. I saw the basement and ... » Read more...




