Hi Sahira,
Welcome to Scribophile. I'm glad to see you've jumped right in. I hope you stay around for a while.
-Ben

hi, sahira--
thank you for your helpful critique of 'base experiments'!
you've hit on some potential avenues for exploration in rewrites/edits on this one. much appreciated!
(and welcome to the site! )

Dear Sahira -- Thank you for your critique of Death Notes!

I find it fascinating that the story has generated so much interest -- particularly how people really clearly want to know more about the victim. I hadn't planned on it being more than a quick 5-minute write / 2-minute read -- I couldn't sleep one evening so just bashed it out.

It was a little bit of fun, but I wonder if it might have struck a chord somewhere. I can't *quite* see how to structure a longer work comprised of people vomiting into each other yet... but you never know... the madness may strike!

Kind regards and thanks again,

Laos

Welcome