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On The .44 Revolver, by Alyssa Franklin:
It was a black .44 revolver. I don’t know any guns too
well, except from TV. Ironically, I can’t even remem... » Read more...
On All That We See or Seem, by Terry D. Scheerer: The opening line,"The house, as always, beckoned him,"
grabbed me; a great hook, it compelled me to read on. I was not
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