Well, like I said in my intro, it can be hard to find the meaning in poetry, and I did the best I could. Sorry if I maybe missed the some, but I'm glad you found my commentary helpful

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hey, read it. will have comments soon.

Taken not-sarcastically, the quote is completely and totally objectifying women (obviously).

Even if it's a joke, though, it's implying that pornography (and, in a looser, less defensible way, sexual pleasure in general) is meant for men and is centered around men's pleasure.

Thanks for the critque. I agrre with yall to, I think it is way to jumpie. I just had no clue on how to change that. This was not my best piece, not even close and I wanted to change that. Thank you for your time.

Hello, Shane. I heard that you were in "Summer Companionship for Lonely Writers" can you ask Lisette on her scratchpad if I can join? I plan on writing during the summer