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Jack McFie

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Thank you for your very helpful comments! These are all good questions I'm going to have to ponder in the next revision. Thanks again!!

Name:	Shayda Bakhshi
Sex:	Female
Location:	Austin
Words Written:	4524
Hottest Words:	hattie, white, eyes, red, felt, cain

About Me

Occupation:	Student
Interests:	creative writing psychology Freud music Elizabethan history
Favorite Books:	The Little Friend House of the Spirits The Phantom Tollbooth The Secret History Sabriel The Wheel of Time Series The Great Gatsby Jane Eyre Harry Potter Elizabethan biographies Tender is the Night The Beautiful and Damned The Stranger The Chronicles of Narnia Rituals Anne of Green Gables Wide Sargasso Sea
Favorite Movies:	Gone With the Wind The Wedding Singer Spaceballs LotR The Emperor's New Groove Spinal Tap Blues Brothers Star Wars (old school) The Princess Diaries Edward Scissorhands The Little Mermaid The Lion King Anne of Green Gables The Chronicles of Narnia (crappy BBC version) Bed Knobs and Broomsticks
Favorite TV Shows:	The Office

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June 8

Shayda Bakhshi wrote on Robert James Shand's scratchpad.

June 6

Shayda Bakhshi wrote on Robert James Shand's scratchpad.

May 29

Shayda Bakhshi wrote a critique for Reverent, Chapter 1, by Jack McFie.

Shayda Bakhshi published Beowulf.

May 28

Shayda Bakhshi published An Autumn Evening in Nova Scotia.

Shayda Bakhshi wrote a critique for Volunteers, by Cathy Carlson.

May 24

Shayda Bakhshi wrote a critique for Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz.

Shayda Bakhshi became a fan of Carrie Griffin.

Shayda Bakhshi published Hattie Booth.

Shayda Bakhshi wrote a critique for Places From the Center: I, II, IV, Chapter 4, by Lisette Wood.

Shayda Bakhshi wrote a critique for Untitled Story 1, by Carrie Griffin.

Shayda Bakhshi voted.

May 23

Shayda Bakhshi wrote a critique for Wist, by Lisette Wood.

Shayda Bakhshi joined the circle Summer Companionship for Lonely Writers.

Latest Works

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Beowulf

An Autumn Evening in Nova Scotia

short story, fiction, fantasy

Based on the Old English poem; I've incorporated many of the smaller elements of Beowulf into my piece. If you've read "Beowulf", I hope you can find and enjoy them. If you've only seen the movie, you probably won't. » Read...

short story

Joyce is a dreamer; her imaginings are too powerful to put in words, so she can only feel them. » Read...

Hattie Booth

short story, fiction

An oldish piece I wrote last year; a throwback of my "Anne of Green Gables"-saturated upbringing, but entirely removed from L.M. Montgomery's rose-colored novels. » Read...

Latest Critiques and Comments

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On Reverent, Chapter 1, by Jack McFie: First of all, what really intrigued me about this story was your description; this rat seems like a nice guy and I want to fe... » Read more...

On Volunteers, by Cathy Carlson: What impresses me with this piece is that you have taken a would-be angsty subject and made it palatable. There's a... » Read more...

On Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz: I'd like to preface this whole critique with the uncultured "I'm completely oblivious to how poetry works" line, beca... » Read more...