On Reverent, Chapter 1, by Jack McFie: First of all, what really intrigued me about this story was your description; this rat seems like a nice guy and I want to fe... » Read more...

On Volunteers, by Cathy Carlson: What impresses me with this piece is that you have taken a would-be angsty subject and made it palatable.  There's a... » Read more...

On Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz: I'd like to preface this whole critique with the uncultured "I'm completely oblivious to how poetry works" line, beca... » Read more...

On Untitled Story 1, by Carrie Griffin: I always love what you write, and this piece is no exception.  My main concern with your mechanics, though, is the time ... » Read more...

On Wist, by Lisette Wood: I love your language; it's vivid and indulgent but not excessive.  I especially like the aesthetics of: once to wisp... » Read more...