On I wonder about you, by Sherry. Attwood:  Hi, I thank you all for your input, it is most aprreciated. I will take note of my flow and grammer....my sore point...... » Read more...

On There sex life, by Chelsi Brown: Opening Comments  I think you onto something great. Its a pity its so very short ....... Plot  Rymes well and it... » Read more...

On Drowning Blood, by panicnight26:  Hi ,I guess it depends on the mind frame. I thought it made perfect sense. Well written Thanks, keep up the good work &... » Read more...

On Good Enough for Me, by dreamchaser: Opening Comments  Hi. I have to tell you firstly, I am no good at this not experienced enough or a good enough writer I... » Read more...

On Exhausted but not exasperated, by Victoria Farrerah:  Hi there. I really liked that. We all do that sometimes. Talk to ourselves. I think you need to add more to it. Too sho... » Read more...

On An Altuistic Gesture, by Marie Browne: Opening Comments  I really enjoyed this..... There is a mysterious flare to it especially the thoughts of the pretens o... » Read more...

On Hey Angel (Talk To Me), by Angel w o Wings:  Hi. I have read a few of your poems and what I really like about each one is the honesty. You are the voice for those w... » Read more...

On Let Zeus Record, by William Craig:  WOW!......I really ,really, enjoyed reading that. Wow! I enjoyed it so much that i felt dissapointed that there was not... » Read more...

On Memorial, by Elle St.Clair: Opening Comments   Hello, I really liked your poem,  it's beautifully sad. I am almost too afraid to give my o... » Read more...

On Fruit of a labor, by Jaya Huprikar: Opening Comments  Hi. I really liked this poem. I am not great at this .critique. other people work.  I under... » Read more...

On Way Back When......., by EFSage:  Oh I absolutely loved, loved this poem. It was funny and I enjoyed reading it.  I loved how you capture the m... » Read more...

On Almost 40 in the Age Of Hipsters, by Traci S:  Hi. I really liked this as I think we can all relate to the age thing. I especially liked the thirties and agree with y... » Read more...

On The Molester, by Debbie Kerr:  I am so sorry for your families trauma. I have had this experience to....................... I am sorry. Sorry for your... » Read more...

On Letter From A Broken Heart, by Vinny Balducci:  Hi, Wow. I think you have touched the hearts of many many people with this honest piece. What I especially liked was th... » Read more...

On Lonely Heart, by a.mscifi: Plot  He left you alone, standing in the rain         Is this literal, as in he left&nb... » Read more...

On My New Best Friend, by Ink Weaver:  I absolutely loved that. I have two of those cute fury , intelligent beauties. I thought that was great. Very well done... » Read more...

On Sad woman's Blues, by a.mscifi:  Hi. I dont have anything  to critique, I really liked that . It was vivd in description. You took me back in ... » Read more...

On Late Night Visitor, by Ink Weaver: Opening Comments I really liked this poem very much, I too lost a brother and a sister, but I envy that you have the courage... » Read more...

On The Relief of Writing, by Joe Phelps: Opening Comments Well!, Well! .........Well!. That was sexy.........one just needed to look at the "NO RULES IN YOUR " ... » Read more...

On Ancien, by Rob DeHart: Opening Comments  I really liked the poem and the flow of your sentences. Themes   If it is my eternal blood you... » Read more...

On A Small World, by Karissa: Opening Comments  Something personal. Thank you for sharing.   Plot   I liked it very much although I felt ... » Read more...

On The Gift You Gave To Me, by Racheal Lynn: Opening Comments  Hi, I think it would have been good to let the reader inn on, who gave you the gift? Themes  I... » Read more...

On Warchild, by penpa:  I could see my home Town and all of your truths. We do not have to look very far to see this reality, it is all over th... » Read more...

On As Taken As I Am, by Angel w o Wings: Opening Comments  Hi, I am a little nervous about this. All new for me. I liked your poem very much. Moods  "I l... » Read more...

On Invisible Land, by Dylan Moody: Opening Comments  Just simply beautifully written. Simple and to the point. Abuse. Very sad but true. Plot  What... » Read more...