Sorry, I've got nothing critique here. (l.o.l)

Anyway, this was a fine piece you put down and really down to it with spiritual guidence.

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I like how some of the stanzas are repeated.  The language is vivid and captures the reader's attention.  I love how all the senses are interconnected with the spiritual guide from a greater being.  You emphasize sight, sound, and sensation.

This is definitely a really great poem. You conveyed your message well and I most appreciated that it didnt rhyme as so many poems do on this site. The form was ok, just not the way that i would have done it. I thought that the lines were a bit broken up and that made it not flow as well. I also found that you probably should have used more punctuation. There were points that you did one second and then the next there was none. That also would have made it flow better. Yet, I could still relate to it. Had it flowed better there would have been more sympathy as I read and had the punctuation been a bit more consistent i could have concentrated more on the content vs the structure. But, all in all this is a good poem. Keep Writing!