Stefan Kaiser


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The easiest way to show that it's an e-mail is probably to add some "headers" into it. Take a look at the very top of an e-mail and look for stuff like:
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Thank you so much for your critique. I'm glad that someone got that all those lower case I's were purposeful.
hey, stefan!!
congratulations on your win in the site contest!!
congratulations on your win in the site contest!!
Hi, I'd actually like to apologize for that critique I posted the other night. I'm making a new rule for myself not to log onto scribophile under the influence. I looked through it and realized there was very little constructive about the criticism. I'm not sure how to delete these things, so I guess it'll have to stand, but I wanted you to understand I wasn't exactly in a delicate state of mind. I'd write a better one, but find that I have little to say and don't want to take up anymore undeserved karma points.
Thanks for your comments on Feal's Pride! I'll see if I can fix the plot problems.
That's probably my issue right there. I'm used to the British pronunciation of things half the time due to my strange childhood as a british/american confused teen. I still liked the poem, by the way! I just like to nitpick
Ahhh, I see! That does make it make more sense. (However,the way I say it with and forthwith don't rhyme anyway. the "th" in forthwith is the same soud both times, while "with" is more like "the"
hi, stefan--
thanks for your thoughtful comments! you caught a few things i felt were weak, and i agree, not really a horror story. i guess i was going for thoughtful...or thought-provoking.
will probably be more effective once i clarify and edit. thanks so much!
thanks for your thoughtful comments! you caught a few things i felt were weak, and i agree, not really a horror story. i guess i was going for thoughtful...or thought-provoking.
Thanks Stefan! I had a really hard time writing this, and the ending is a bit abrupt and unexplained. Good point with "remaining"! I'll change that, definitely.
Thank you for such a detailed and thoughtful critique of "Hands." It was extremely helpful and is much appreciated.
| Name: | Stefan Kaiser |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | Diez, Germany |
| Birthday: | Feb. 13, 1987 |
| Words Written: | 7105 |
| Hottest Words: | day, eyes, find, girl, long, days |
About Me
| Occupation: | Student of Math and English |
| About Me: | The Cat o' Nine Tales I'm not alive, yet I'm not dead. I exist but in your head. I'm a wise man, I'm a fool, I am jester to you all. I want to help, I want to teach, I want to guide, but do not preach. I bring passion, I bring pain, In the end it's all in vain, For there is nothing I can do, But tell a tale for you. |
| Interests: | Fantasy, Sci-Fi, anthropomorphism, RPGs, tabletop strategy games |
| Favorite TV Shows: | Futurama, The Simpsons |
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October 30

Stefan Kaiser edited Mens Sana.
October 23

Stefan Kaiser wrote on Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith's scratchpad.

Stefan Kaiser voted.
October 21

Stefan Kaiser added cognitive dissonance-invisible voice to his reading list.

Stefan Kaiser published Mens Sana.
October 19

Stefan Kaiser voted.
September 7

Stefan Kaiser wrote on Josiah Franco's scratchpad.
September 3

Stefan Kaiser voted.

Stefan Kaiser published Misplacement.
September 2

Stefan Kaiser voted.

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Stefan Kaiser added Brother, Can You Spare the Time? to his reading list.
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A young doctor discovers that some afflictions require a drastic cure.
My entry for the October contest. Thanks to everybody who critiqued, especially Stewart. You were a great help.
The e-mail addresses are, obviously, fake. I... » Read...
My entry for the October contest. Thanks to everybody who critiqued, especially Stewart. You were a great help.
The e-mail addresses are, obviously, fake. I... » Read...
About the nature of (capital) sins and love; inspired by an excrept of Dante's Divine Comedy:
Hence thou mayst comprehend that love must be
The seed within yourselves of every virtue,
And every act that merits punishment.» Read...
Hence thou mayst comprehend that love must be
The seed within yourselves of every virtue,
And every act that merits punishment.
Sitting in a club, a young man contemplates the loss of his love and how to end the pain, when he is faced with an unexpected answer.
This was written for in-depth analysis at the request of my former English teacher, for use in a si... » Read...
This was written for in-depth analysis at the request of my former English teacher, for use in a si... » Read...
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On T, by N L Snowden: I think this story has potential, even though it feels cut short
in the end. You should expand on Lacey discovering and
under... » Read more...
On cognitive dissonance-invisible voice, by Josiah Franco:
I really like this poem, because it
conveys that peculiar state of mind quite effectively. One reason
for that might be your... » Read more...
On Brother, Can You Spare the Time?, by Ben Jacobson:
This was certainly and interesting
and enjoyable read. It reminded me of Momo, though I can't tell how
likely you are to... » Read more...
On Feal's Pride, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: Somebody has taken the staff's joke to heart and realized it, as
I see. Very unfortunate that neither of you were the fir... » Read more...



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