Perhaps an ending offering a little more hope fo tomorrow lol vinshar

you're very welcome! I plan on returning soon. Congratulations on being published, by the way, i'm sure its a lovely story!

Thank you so much for your help and advice.

Thanks, Stephanie! I'll take a look at it and see what I can do.

Stephanie;
I appreciate you taking the time to read and critique OPL. It's funny about your paragraph suggestion... I've actually changed that back and forth a few times. Thanks again, Jimmy

no not yet but i will im new on here so just learning more about this website which is great so far like and your story was good i liked it

it was a good read not bad but you could of written more about the relationship between arthur and Mitch though still a good read though and keep up the good work

Thanks so much for the thoughtful critique. I'll be taking your suggestions into account in the next draft.

Thanks for your critique. I will be using many of your suggestions.

Thanks, Stephanie. Good point!