Thanks,
Congratulations on your paper and sweet Avatar!
-Ben

back atcha, Stew. love your avatar, too. and profile...lear, gorey, and dahl, oh yeah!

I'll check them out.

your name just keeps getting longer and longer...

hey, stewart--
thanks for your critique! as always, several suggestions i like.

A pleasure. It was a very good read!

Hey, I posted a new bit of flash called No Man Left Behind. I'd love if you could look at it if you have the time.

I'm gonna go crit the last part of the story, 'cause I'm into it. Looking forward to your future critiques of my work!

I just figured since you were using so much realistic cop slang, that they wouldn't use the phrase "Torrance Hospital." Perhaps the hospital part could be reflected outside the dialog.

sure no problem I really liked the story so I'm looking forward to the rest