Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith


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Congratulations on your paper and sweet Avatar!
-Ben
Congratulations on your paper and sweet Avatar!
-Ben
back atcha, Stew. love your avatar, too. and profile...lear, gorey, and dahl, oh yeah!
I'll check them out.
your name just keeps getting longer and longer...
hey, stewart--
thanks for your critique! as always, several suggestions i like.
thanks for your critique! as always, several suggestions i like.
A pleasure. It was a very good read!
Hey, I posted a new bit of flash called No Man Left Behind. I'd love if you could look at it if you have the time.
I'm gonna go crit the last part of the story, 'cause I'm into it. Looking forward to your future critiques of my work!
I just figured since you were using so much realistic cop slang, that they wouldn't use the phrase "Torrance Hospital." Perhaps the hospital part could be reflected outside the dialog.
sure no problem I really liked the story so I'm looking forward to the rest
About Stewart
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| Websites: | http://www.infomancy.net/writing/ |
| Publications: | * "Newly Edited Man" in Issue one of Ruthless Peoples Magazine. * "Times Past" in Issue 34 of Short, Fast, and Deadly. * "Mayday" in 1st issue of Quinc Review Forthcoming: * "Captain Invincible" in Jan '11 issue of Antipodean SF. * Untitled microfiction in Sept 15th issue of Nanoism * "Against the Night" in August 29th issue of Journal of Microliterature. |
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On Sergeant Fang Fulfills His Destiny, by Laurie Paulsen: Opening CommentsIt's been so long that I've read this that I thought I'd give it
another quick go-over, mostly tr... Read →
On Dreams Of Black Cars, by Sammy Mendel: Opening CommentsMy main stylistic quip with this piece is "would". In most
cases it just generalizes the action out of ... Read →
On Query for The Ones They Took (Version 4) Draft?, by karateman7: Opening CommentsThis is a vast improvement. Very nice! Almost the
only thing that's left is copy-editing.
The... Read →
On Within Abandon, Chapter 1: Part 1 - One Year, by Cary A. Morton: Opening CommentsOne of the biggest problems I have with this opening chapter is
there's too much scene-setting and the ac... Read →
















