Thank you for your critique of the Jackonville Incident. I certainly appreciate your thoughtful comments. I am looking at the piece again, to work through some of the issues you raised. Thanks again!

Hey, thanks for the review and sorry it took me a while to get back to you, just finished with a move. Definately appreciate most of the critique, I didn't really realize how screwed some of the tenses were until you pointed it out. As for the invisible man bit, I'm gonna try and make it clearer that it's a refrance to how the invisible man(from the movie) went out and about completely covered in bandages. Oh, and RPG-7s were invented in 1961 and were virtual ubiquitous amogst VC/ NVA. Though the only reason I know that is because I'm a nerd and/or hang out with a couple vietnam vets, so it's all good. Anywho, I'm gonna review something of yours in the next couple days, looking forward to it!

hey! welcome to scribophile, even though your not really still new new. Come on by and read some of my stuff! lemme know what you think!
~Fainne

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