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Thanks again for the comments regarding Vigil Auntie. You've been extremely helpful! I'll look into the title you suggested.
'Best,
Louise
'Best,
Louise
Thank you for your comments on Vigil Auntie, I've updated the piece. I'd love it if you would take another look. I've included some of your suggestions and would like to know how it appears now.
Again, many thanks for the helpful comments,
Louise
Again, many thanks for the helpful comments,
Louise
Hello, T G! I have commented on The Kidnappers. I am also doing a horror/romance story called And So The Lion Fell in Love With The Lamb. Tell me what you think about it on my scratchpad! Bye bye Now!
worked on the vampire story at all lately? 
Thank you! Try going to my profile and critiquing today on Broken Hearted Chapters 0 (Preface) and 1 (Broken Angel). And especially read chapter one because that one was good.
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This story is ment to poke a bit of fun at the horror genre. It's a work in progress. » Read...
855 words - 5 critiques
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On A Fine Line, by Casey Criswell: This piece reads like a detailed outline. The bones
are there but there is not much flesh on them. I can... » Read more...
On Deep Lies the Murky Floor, by Casey Criswell: It's a gteat Idea. You have a tendancy to tell and not
show. The monster is a great idea, but perhaps it shou... » Read more...
On Vigil Auntie-- first chapter, by Louise Kuskovski: A marked improvement. Parragraph one looks
good. Try working on paragrapn two a bit. Maybe
take... » Read more...
On Vigil Auntie-- first chapter, by Louise Kuskovski:
I think it might set the mood of the piece if you start
with " All that remains.... buried with her ... » Read more...