Hello Taylor,

I'm making some more changes to the FFF to make it even better. Check out my Forum post on the topic for details.

-Ben

we forgive you, as long as you come back. hahahaha.
<3

summer. you'd better visit.

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU.

haha, i know right?
i miss you.

your writing is excellent.
and i have to post all my stuff.... gurrr.

Hey Taylor,
Thanks for the critique!!! I will go in and return the favor in a few....I will let you know when the piece is edited. I wrote the story as a 15 minute freewrite without editing for a workshop - hence the typos and tense contradictions
Thanks again! Merry Meet!

hi tayyylorrrr.
its cello.

...And thanks for the critique I meant to say that before...

Granted I may be way off base, but when I think prose poetry, I think of poetry with no regular rhyme or rhythm scheme, like free verse, but written as more of a narrative, often in complete sentence. Does that make sense? Again, it's very likely I'm wrong..

hi, taylor--
ha! thanks for the critique of 'clean, dead steve'--you helped clear up several punctuational spots for me. (punctuational?)
i appreciate you wading in and grabbing hold of it like you did.

Hello, Taylor! Do you wanna read any of my works? Just let me know on my scratchpad! I also look forward to reading more of your works and hearing your questionnare!