Thanks for reading and critiquing my story! The kind words and the suggestions are equally helpful. ^_^

What's eating Gilbert Grape?

BTW, I loved Benny & Joon, what a great story &Johnny Depp, mmm

Tayor,
I'm sorry, I reread my comments. And you are absolutely right! I would have been really pissed if someone wrote like that about one of my stories.
I have withdrawn the critique.
please accept my apology. I didn't mean to hurt you. I can be very mean sometimes; I am a real shithead sometimes, and you know waht? I do it to myself, too --I am my hardest critique. I hate myself sometimes when I do this shit. I'm so schitzy sometimes.
I feel realy bad.
But I hope I can make it up to you a little bychanging my critiques. I hope so. I don't know what come over me sometimes and I just insert my foot, shoe and all, in my mouth. It is such an awkwark feeling when someone points it out.
And you should be proud of yourself for not accepting any bullshit from me! By sending me that note, you opened my eyes to what I had done. Never stop standing up on your own and sticking up for yourself.
Actually, you should feel all the more better for it.
I do look forward to reading more of your stories; honestly!
~Kirsten

Hello Taylor,

I'm making some more changes to the FFF to make it even better. Check out my Forum post on the topic for details.

-Ben

we forgive you, as long as you come back. hahahaha.
<3

summer. you'd better visit.

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU.

haha, i know right?
i miss you.

your writing is excellent.
and i have to post all my stuff.... gurrr.

Hey Taylor,
Thanks for the critique!!! I will go in and return the favor in a few....I will let you know when the piece is edited. I wrote the story as a 15 minute freewrite without editing for a workshop - hence the typos and tense contradictions
Thanks again! Merry Meet!

hi tayyylorrrr.
its cello.

...And thanks for the critique I meant to say that before...

Granted I may be way off base, but when I think prose poetry, I think of poetry with no regular rhyme or rhythm scheme, like free verse, but written as more of a narrative, often in complete sentence. Does that make sense? Again, it's very likely I'm wrong..

hi, taylor--
ha! thanks for the critique of 'clean, dead steve'--you helped clear up several punctuational spots for me. (punctuational?)
i appreciate you wading in and grabbing hold of it like you did.

Hello, Taylor! Do you wanna read any of my works? Just let me know on my scratchpad! I also look forward to reading more of your works and hearing your questionnare!

hi, taylor!
you've been randomly selected to be our very first featured author for the flash fiction fridays circle! congratulations!!
i'd like to send you a short questionnaire to let the group know a little more about you, and then post it this saturday in the circle forum.
if you're not comfortable emailing me at lauriemariepee@aol.com with your external email address, we can figure out another way to do this so it won't cost you 'virtual coins'.
thanks for being a member of the circle!
talk to you soon!

Hey Taylor,
Thanks for posting to Flash Fiction Fridays. We're just now mixing it up a bit so come by and see what we have in store.
-Ben

Thank you for your critique of my poem Three: Isness. Now that I have an upgraded membership, I was able to do some formatting to fix an obvious point of view problem that was causing a lot of confusion. I was wondering if you would re-read it and let me know what you think.

Thank you for your critique on Secret, it helped me make up my mind to finly brake it up. The gender for me is a girl (that being I see my self as the speaker) but I gess that is up to who ever is reading it and what gender they are. Thank you,

hi, taylor--
thanks for your comments on my 'dancing with mrs brown' story! i appreciate you reading and taking the time and effort to let me know what you think.

O, you love Spelling Bees too? I was a spelling bee winner a couple of times!

Welcome to scribophile! Wanna read my works? Just click my name, scroll down to latest works and you should see My Boyfriend's A Vampire! I hope that you enjoy it and maybe become a fan of me! Take care!