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On Sidewalk Meeting, by Shane Gannaway: The first two lines are solid.
And my eyes hit ground
That was awesome! The absence of the word 'the' before... » Read more...
On Places From the Center, by Lisette Wood: dig in trowel whiff
of earth coffee-grounds leafy curls
of vine and peeking sprout
grind dirt deeper
That was a... » Read more...
On Wist, by Lisette Wood: Pretty sweet Mimi!
the tune of a woodbird,
I heard.
That was me favorite part. That whole stanza was awesome. I'm
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On Untitled Project, Chapter 1: Chpater One, by Shane Gannaway: Awesome piece! Your voice is very solid but
the character is definitely someone different from yourself. I... » Read more...