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wow bc that is gene like exactly from outlaw star...strange.
hey i saw your profile pic..i love outlaw star lol. Just wanted to say hi.
Hey GeeK,
Back atchya on the pad, and looking forward to more (2 Chapters of my beast up now, check it out)...B. well...J.A.T
Back atchya on the pad, and looking forward to more (2 Chapters of my beast up now, check it out)...B. well...J.A.T
Hey Geek,
Thanks for making me your first Critique. The ending of Eternal Sunset (I hate that title) is supposed to indicate that the sun is dying and therefore no longer has the power to kill him. As for the other ways to die, I guess I assumed that it would be impossible to decapitate oneself and I never heard of fire before. Thanks for pointing out these issues. If the ending is not working then the story's not working. I appreciate your time.
-Ben
Thanks for making me your first Critique. The ending of Eternal Sunset (I hate that title) is supposed to indicate that the sun is dying and therefore no longer has the power to kill him. As for the other ways to die, I guess I assumed that it would be impossible to decapitate oneself and I never heard of fire before. Thanks for pointing out these issues. If the ending is not working then the story's not working. I appreciate your time.
-Ben
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | The States |
| Words Written: | 10587 |
| Hottest Words: | airship, olin, gave, raine, large, justinia |
About Me
| Occupation: | Central Supply & Transport Clerk. AKA, Office Monkey. |
| About Me: | I'm 28 and currently getting my Masters. Writing is very important to me, which is why I'm here; to work on my skills. |
| Interests: | Science Fiction, Fantasy, nearly all types of music. |
| Publications: | None yet. |
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July 5
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June 21
The Geek created a thread called Parallels in Justinia.
May 31
The Geek became a fan of Phedre.
The Geek edited Justinia, Chapter 2: Olin.
The Geek edited Justinia, Chapter 2: Olin.
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The Geek wrote a critique for The Song of Aedmon Lost, Chapter 1: A Calling in Eaton: a prologue, by Joshua Allen Tompkins.
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The Geek wrote on Joshua Allen Tompkins's scratchpad.
May 25
The Geek added Betrayal (Star Wars: Legacy of the Force, Book 1) to his bookshelf.
The Geek added Bloodlines (Star Wars: Legacy of the Force, Book 2) to his bookshelf.
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On The Song of Aedmon Lost, Chapter 1: A Calling in Eaton: a prologue, by Joshua Allen Tompkins: There are some grammatical mistypes, such as using a period and
comma in the wrong place. It's nothing bad, just so... » Read more...
On untitled, by Phedre: Very good style, and very visually enticing. I
haven't read much tanka poetry and I'm very satisfied with... » Read more...
On Shame, by Phedre: I like that it's free-verse and not standard rhyme.
Rhymes sound good overall, but it can be much harder to f... » Read more...
On Eternal Sunset, by Ben Jacobson: First, I'd like
to say that I enjoyed the story very much.
It was very different from
the other Vamp stories that I'v... » Read more...