Tonari
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Hello! If it your novel was for nanowrimo, then feel free to soften everything I said - my nano stuff is damn near incomprehensible in parts XD Good work!
Congrats, loved your story. I look forward to hearing more!
Thank you. Congrats to you also!
Congrats on your third place in the NaNo contest!
Congratulations!
Thanks for taking the time to read my story, 'Over Extended.' I got some more. I hope you'll read those too. Thanks again.
Your Welcome.
Oh and welcome to Scribophile
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Thank you for your critique
Hey there, welcome and have fun on the site!
Welcome to Scribophile!
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | Maryland |
| Words Written: | 4,359 |
About Tonari
| Occupation: | writer, mother, couch psychologist to best friends, frustrated multilinguist. |
| About Me: | I was a family psychologist before the kids came. I've been writing for about 3.5 years now and am loving the journey. I've finished my first manuscript, a narrative nonfiction, and will be agent shopping in the next few months. In the mean time, I've discovered how much fun fiction can be. I'm writing fly-by-the-seat-of-my-pants style, as Master King suggested. So far, it's working for me. My WIP right now is a paranormal adventure (if that's a genre) and is my NaNoWriMo project. |
| Interests: | Horses, dogs, cats, riding, reading, meeting interesting people then getting into their heads. I love traveling, learning new languages and Korean food. |
| Websites: | under construction! |
| Favorite Movies: | The Abyss, Contact, ID-4 |
| Favorite TV Shows: | Lost, Mystery Diagnosis |
| Favorite Quotes: | If you don't know how it works, don't f--- with it. |
| Hates: | Narcissistic tendencies in otherwise amazing people, not being able to find my next read, getting up early. |
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February 22
Tonari wrote on nanomagnetic's scratchpad.
February 20
February 19
Tonari wrote on gary wedlund's scratchpad.
January 15
Tonari posted The Floating Man, Chapter 6: Atoms.
January 14
Tonari added Under the Dome: A Novel to her bookshelf.
Tonari wrote on Kate Smith's scratchpad.
January 11
Tonari wrote on Elaine Guillermin's scratchpad.
Tonari wrote on Daniel Rodrigues-Martin's scratchpad.
Dec 17, 2009
Tonari wrote a critique for ATTITUDES AND PLATITUDES, by Marion Dollar.
Dec 12, 2009
Tonari commented on Over Extended, by Cornelius Butterfield.
Nov 24, 2009
Tonari liked james heller's critique of A Very Intense Game of Monopoly, by Henry Emcee.
Nov 23, 2009
Tonari wrote on Trev Bougill's scratchpad.
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Cabot Rosseau suffers a traumatic brain injury during military training which lands him in a coma. Danica, his frantic wife, fears her husband will never wake up. But sometimes, consciousness (or unconsciousness) isn't always what it seems. Strange... Read →
2426 words - 3 critiques
This is my first attempt at a novel and is also the first 2000 words of my nano project. It's raw, unedited but readable (I believe).
The story is a paranormal adventure, if that's even a genre. The MC is stuck in a coma but learns a few tricks f... Read →
The story is a paranormal adventure, if that's even a genre. The MC is stuck in a coma but learns a few tricks f... Read →
1933 words - 3 critiquesLatest Critiques and Comments
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On Jellystoned, by LaWren Curewreck: Opening Comments
This was wonderfully done! It was a very honest,
accurately introspective journey and one that I'... Read →
Critique - Nov 18, 2009, 3:54am - 199 words - 0.73 karma points
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On Scott, an Epic, by steve blythe: Opening Comments
This is my first critique of a poetry piece so bear with
me. I chose your poem because I recently fin... Read →
Critique - Nov 13, 2009, 3:03pm - 203 words - 1.33 karma points
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On The World Turned., by Mullog Roots: Opening Comments
I enjoyed your story. Though not necessarily a new idea, your
voice and wordsmithing made it fun and fresh.... Read →
Critique - Nov 10, 2009, 6:15pm - 259 words - 1.2 karma points
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