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Hello Torq,
Are you ready to get back in it with the FFF. I've made some changes to make it more rigorous. Check out my forum post to find out about it. I'd love to have you back.
-Ben
P.S. Thanks again for the June Challenge.
Are you ready to get back in it with the FFF. I've made some changes to make it more rigorous. Check out my forum post to find out about it. I'd love to have you back.
-Ben
P.S. Thanks again for the June Challenge.
Hey!
Thanks for your Critique. I really agree with most of what you said, it just took someone elses eyes to see the story without the haze of authorship. thank you!
Thanks for your Critique. I really agree with most of what you said, it just took someone elses eyes to see the story without the haze of authorship. thank you!
ha! you have a point. and you did a great job!
hey, torq!
thanks for your comments on my 'base experiments' story--i agree, this story needs more meat to it. writing a complete story in 1000 words is tough! arrgh!
thanks for your comments on my 'base experiments' story--i agree, this story needs more meat to it. writing a complete story in 1000 words is tough! arrgh!
Congrats on becoming an honorable mention!
hey, torq--
congratulations on your win, dude!!
great job!! i'm happy for you.
congratulations on your win, dude!!
great job!! i'm happy for you.
hey remember me? thnx for the info on writing if u want to read my first two chapters of my book, Destiny, then ure welcome to, its my first uploads so if u have any tips, i would appreciate them...
Hello Tor,
Just read one of your stories. I'm hoping to critique it soon. Meanwhile (love that comic book word) were making some changes to the FFF come check it out.
-Ben
Just read one of your stories. I'm hoping to critique it soon. Meanwhile (love that comic book word) were making some changes to the FFF come check it out.
-Ben
Another well thought out plot line!
Hello, Torquil! Wanna read My Boyfriend's A Vanpire. Just click my name, scroll down to latest works from my profile and you should see it! I hope that you enjoy it! Contact me on my scratchpad if you wanna read another work of mine. I hope that you enjoy my stories and become a fan of me! Take care!
| Name: | Torquil Mann |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | Maine |
| Words Written: | 4582 |
| Hottest Words: | lincoln, mazin, tale, ruth, yasir, city |
About Me
| Occupation: | Student Sword Fighting |
| About Me: | I was born in Maine, and I have lived here all my life. I go to school for film and multimedia, though I have hopes of publishing a septet of young assault adventure novels that will take the literary world by storm, netting me not only fame and fortune, but the ability to spend my days relaxing and writing at my leisure. I am an instructor in the art of sword fighting, as well as many other types of weapons. If you have any questions as to how a particular weapon might be used , in your story, please |
| Interests: | Reading, Writing, Fighting, Reading about writing, Reading about fighting, Writing about Fighting, Fighting about Writing |
| Publications: | None |
| Favorite Books: | Anything by David Gemmell |
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Why is it that childish dreams have to end in childhood? Cant we all grow up to be cowboys and pirates? » Read...
A look in to the ancient art of lying for entertainment. » Read...
Two men wager on who can fulfill a prophecy the best » Read...
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On A Winter Hunt, by TL Carter:
Hello TL. Nice piece of work you
have here. Though I don’t like to jump in to a critique by listing
a flaw, there is... » Read more...
On Base Experiments, by Laurie Paulsen: Excellent piece Laurie.
The main character is, deplorable,
disgusting, down right hateable. Which is what you we... » Read more...
On Lord of The Hidden Places, by John P. Finch:
Hello John. God Bless you for taking
on the task of trying your hand at S+S. It is indeed a very
difficult genera to d... » Read more...
On The Saga of Harold, by Nathan P.:
My only critique of this piece is the use of the dream. When a
story opens with a dream, it has a certain ring to it. ... » Read more...



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