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Thank you for your thoughtful critique of Nowhere, Truman. And welcome to Scribophile. Cute cheeks you got there.
Ah, I see. Well you were a very cute baby. 
Oh! That baby is sooo cute! Is it yours?
Mostly science fiction, but a lot of fantasy and modern fantasy x3
oh, wow! great stuff! i've seen several of those--'ichi the killer' was wild! 'audition' was skeeve-inducing. miike is one messed-up dude.
i've moved away from the oeuvre, but 'oldboy' was supposed to be pretty extreme, too. (i've only seen the tongue scene.
) saw 'the host' and loved it, but i think those were s. korean...
'barbarella' was kitschy goodness (although those dolls in the cave freaked me the hell out.) 'evolution' was goofy and fun, too. lots of good stuff in your terrible movies file.
i've moved away from the oeuvre, but 'oldboy' was supposed to be pretty extreme, too. (i've only seen the tongue scene.
) saw 'the host' and loved it, but i think those were s. korean...'barbarella' was kitschy goodness (although those dolls in the cave freaked me the hell out.) 'evolution' was goofy and fun, too. lots of good stuff in your terrible movies file.
oooh, what kind of terrible movies do you like?
hi, truman--
thank you for your thoughtful critique! i'm so happy the tone of the story came across, and appreciate your suggestions. many good things in there.
thank you for your thoughtful critique! i'm so happy the tone of the story came across, and appreciate your suggestions. many good things in there.
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| Name: | Truman Shuck |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | Columbia, MO |
| Birthday: | Sep 5, 1988 |
| Words Written: | 382 |
About Truman
| Occupation: | I make computers do Magic Things. |
| About Me: | I have spent some time in the Big People World working & am more than quite ready to go back to school this coming fall. |
| Interests: | Oranges & Tea, Sleeping, Programming, Drums, Reading&Writing&, Guitar, Terrible Movies. |
| Favorite Books: | Towing Jehovah, Simon of Space, The Chronicles of Amber, The Wheel of Time & & & |
| Favorite TV Shows: | I love time traveling polar bears. |
| Loves: | I love People & Dogs & Laughing & Cats & Warmth & |
| Hates: | Beans, Pretension, Waking Up, Yelling, Blind -isms, Tequila, Forgetting Things, Over Reaction, Skinning my Knee, Terrible Music. |
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Sep 29, 2009
Truman Shuck liked LJ Connell's critique of Well, at least I got a poem out of it., by Truman Shuck.
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Aug 2, 2009
Truman Shuck wrote on Mechele Mede's scratchpad.
Jul 21, 2009
Truman Shuck wrote on Elizabeth Kilburn's scratchpad.
Jul 9, 2009
Truman Shuck wrote on Laurie Paulsen's scratchpad.
Truman Shuck wrote on Laurie Paulsen's scratchpad.
Jul 8, 2009
Jun 22, 2009
Truman Shuck edited (the wind).
Truman Shuck edited (the wind).
Truman Shuck commented on (the wind).
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This is a very fresh poem, which is opposite of the others that I've posted here (they having sat around awhile, first).
I don't have any direction. Have at it.
Ninja edit: I didn't like how the first three lines sat, so I fixed them really q... Read →
I don't have any direction. Have at it.
Ninja edit: I didn't like how the first three lines sat, so I fixed them really q... Read →
86 words - 4 critiques
I know I'm influenced (at least a little -- ha!) by e e cummings. Some of you might find this tacky, some people might find it used well (I prefer to think the latter). I appreciate your thoughts in this matter -- but I appreciate thoughts about th... Read →
149 words - 4 critiquesTell me about:
How you feel about the splitting of lines & words.
The connection between the two images.
The clarity (or lack) of the theme.
Anything else.
Thanks,
Truman Read →
How you feel about the splitting of lines & words.
The connection between the two images.
The clarity (or lack) of the theme.
Anything else.
Thanks,
Truman Read →
147 words - 5 critiquesLatest Critiques and Comments
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On Nowhere, by Kadlin Seagess: Hey Kadlin,
I want to start off by saying that I like a lot of the imagery
of your poem; it's short, sweet and very easy ... Read →
Critique - Sep 29, 2009, 3:25am - 443 words - 2.33 karma points
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On Jones Goes Fishing, by Laurie Paulsen: Hey Laurie,
I want to start off by saying that I think you use a lot of
really perfect words in this story,
laying do... Read →
Critique - Jul 8, 2009, 11:49pm - 610 words - 3.14 karma points
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On (the wind), by Truman Shuck: Hey Gang,
I'm not sure if anyone will come back and check this or not --
but I'd like to thank all of you for the tim... Read →
On Portabella Stew abt. 730 wds., by Linda McHenry: Hey Lisa,
I'd like to start off saying that I think you have a pretty
interesting idea here -- like Marion said, Elves un... Read →
Critique - Jun 22, 2009, 4:21am - 881 words - 4.08 karma points
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