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Hello John,
Another round of changes has come to the FFF. Check out my forum post to see if you're interested.
-Ben
Another round of changes has come to the FFF. Check out my forum post to see if you're interested.
-Ben
Hello John,
We've made some changes to Flash Fiction Fridays and we would love to have you participating again. Come check it out.
-Ben
We've made some changes to Flash Fiction Fridays and we would love to have you participating again. Come check it out.
-Ben
Hello,, uglyboxer! Wanna read a work of mine called Heart of Ice? Just click my name, go to latest works from my profile and you should see it! Read, comment, and I hope that you enjoy it!
Thanks for your critiques of The Liars Tale. I have edited it going through to try to correct every grammatical mistake I could fine.
I have also altered the ending. I agree with you that it just didn’t fit. It felt.. Tacked on.. Like I needed it for it to be enjoyable. I have decided to end it in a completely different manner, sticking with the “travel guide” feel. The event is still there, but now its just in summery. I managed to shave off around 400 words.
I hope it flows much better now.
Thanks
I have also altered the ending. I agree with you that it just didn’t fit. It felt.. Tacked on.. Like I needed it for it to be enjoyable. I have decided to end it in a completely different manner, sticking with the “travel guide” feel. The event is still there, but now its just in summery. I managed to shave off around 400 words.
I hope it flows much better now.
Thanks
About uglyboxer
| Occupation: | Jack of all trades with only one employer. Project manager, I guess. |
| About Me: | 30-something lost in childhood. A strong sense of devotion and duty, bu I'm unwilling to part with the freedoms of youth. |
| Interests: | Go, the ancient and beautiful game. Punk rock. The web. |
| Favorite Books: | The Lime Twig, by John Hawkes Last Nights of Paris by Philippe Soupault Moby Dick by Herman Melville |
| Favorite Movies: | Henry Fool Simple Men |
| Favorite TV Shows: | Battlestar Galactica (the new version) |
| Favorite Quotes: | “It is better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation.” -Herman Melville |
| Loves: | My Mac. My messenger bike. GO! |
| Hates: | Feeling lost. |
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May 3, 2008

uglyboxer wrote a critique for Cyclical, by Taylor Smith.
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uglyboxer wrote a critique for My Short Walk Home, by Vega The Cat Lover.

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uglyboxer wrote a critique for The Unconfined Skies Remain, by Circus.
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An odd tale of a lost traveler, and a missed appointment. Read →
A lost soul in a rugged city. Read →
A moment in a day of two who know each other, too well. Read →
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On Pillar of Salt, by Dillon X. R. Trombley: I agree with the other critique in that the emotion
expressed is far too one-sided. I don't think Alex is
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