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Hello John,
Another round of changes has come to the FFF. Check out my forum post to see if you're interested.
-Ben
Hello John,
We've made some changes to Flash Fiction Fridays and we would love to have you participating again. Come check it out.
-Ben
Hello,, uglyboxer! Wanna read a work of mine called Heart of Ice? Just click my name, go to latest works from my profile and you should see it! Read, comment, and I hope that you enjoy it!
Thanks for your critiques of The Liars Tale. I have edited it going through to try to correct every grammatical mistake I could fine.

I have also altered the ending. I agree with you that it just didn’t fit. It felt.. Tacked on.. Like I needed it for it to be enjoyable. I have decided to end it in a completely different manner, sticking with the “travel guide” feel. The event is still there, but now its just in summery. I managed to shave off around 400 words.

I hope it flows much better now.

Thanks
Name: John Howard
Sex: Male
Location: Portland, OR
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About uglyboxer

Occupation: Jack of all trades with only one employer. Project manager, I guess.
About Me: 30-something lost in childhood. A strong sense of devotion and duty, bu I'm unwilling to part with the freedoms of youth.
Interests: Go, the ancient and beautiful game. Punk rock. The web.
Favorite Books: The Lime Twig, by John Hawkes
Last Nights of Paris by Philippe Soupault
Moby Dick by Herman Melville
Favorite Movies: Henry Fool
Simple Men
Favorite TV Shows: Battlestar Galactica (the new version)
Favorite Quotes: “It is better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation.”
-Herman Melville
Loves: My Mac. My messenger bike. GO!
Hates: Feeling lost.

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uglyboxer wrote a critique for Cyclical, by Taylor Smith.
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Apr 14, 2008
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uglyboxer replied to the thread Things I read in school.
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uglyboxer wrote a critique for My Short Walk Home, by Vega The Cat Lover.
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Apr 13, 2008
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Apr 12, 2008
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uglyboxer wrote a critique for The Unconfined Skies Remain, by Circus.

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An odd tale of a lost traveler, and a missed appointment. Read →
A moment in a day of two who know each other, too well. Read →

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On Pillar of Salt, by Dillon X. R. Trombley:  I agree with the other critique in that the emotion expressed is far too one-sided.  I don't think Alex is une... Read →