Vega,

I miss your work and now I can't even read the old ones . Anyway, FFF is now more rigorous (and has an additional F) check out my forum post for more details.

Hey Vega,
Still missing you in the FFF. We've made some changes. Come on by and check them out.
-Ben

Hey Vega,
Another FFF without a Vega story, we're bummed. Hope you can jump in next time.

By the way, you inspired me to attempt a full immersion flash fiction this week, like Rupert and Me. I'm afraid it didn't come out half as well as you do it. If you have a chance come check it out. It's called Untitled.
-Ben

Hey Vega,
We missed you in the FFF this week. Hope you can come back next time.
-Ben

I can only do so much. I'm glad my words made an impact before I really wrote anything.

Dude, I just read good stuff. No need to thank, it's my pleasure. I just hope my work will live somewhere near yours in terms of sheer awesomeness.

hi, elliott--
you're very welcome! reading your story was a pleasure.
see ya in the flash fridays circle!

Vega,
Thanks for jumping in with the FFF. Could you do me a favor and publish your Flash Fiction piece to the circle. Just click edit and then on the second page check the box next to Flash Fiction Fridays. That way no one will miss it when they are critiquing. Thanks.
-Ben

Hey Vega,
If your interested in the FFF, don't forget to click on circles and join officially. That way you can post your work to the Circle and we won't miss it. Cheers,
-Ben

Hi Vega,
First of all, I'll admit that my poems sometimes seem to have random images thrown into them, but I'll see if I can clarify your confusion.
Slab on my untraveled road... meaning, if the road is made of slabs, it's not smooth and easy, but rough and therefore, unwelcome. Foreign reed song... by reed I mean the reed used in wind instruments, and foreign, as in different, unknown, not what I'm used to. Erratic presences...irregular presences.
Hope that helps some.

Hi Vega. I'm a cat lover too (I have three). I really appreciate your comments on my poem. I am editing it based on some other feedback and can definitely use what you provided as well. I was going to answer your questions via the scratchpad, but it was getting a little long, so I am sending you a message. Thanks again! I look forward to reading your works and hearing more feedback from you about mine.

Hey! I just wanted to tell you that the second chapter is up!

Hi Vega. Thanks for your pointers, I do well to follow yor advice. But in regards to the "blind date" part, this is intended for my wife of 10 years. We avtually met on a blind date. And this where we are at today all of sudden! I really do appeciate the advice.

Thanks for your comments! I edited the piece a bit if you're interested.