Vincent Fanger


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Sweet Profile Pic, Vincent. I have a friend with the exact same picture (except of him instead of you). It might be a little late but I wanted to welcome you to Scrib.
-Ben
-Ben
Thanks for your nice comment on Feminin.
yeah, "myth" "pith" and cheating for "with" were about the only things I could come up with. I'm not sure anybody would know what I was on about if I used "pith" though.
"I wonder what could be rhymed with lance fanger."
Cliffhanger!
Cliffhanger!
Thanks for your thoughtful critique of my poem "The House that Life Built". I understand what you meant about the line with HOME in it. It was not the intent, but it read like that I suppose nevertheless. I will have to find a different conveyance. It really was meant to represent the mother's ability to finally relax because her child was secure. Oh well, this is why we practice 
Welcome to Scribophile~~~
Welcome to Scribophile~~~
| Name: | Vicente Cardozo |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | San Jose |
| Birthday: | May. 12, 1981 |
| Words Written: | 330 |
| Hottest Words: | submarine, ride, deep, hour, covered, black |
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Vincent Fanger reviewed the book On the Road (Penguin Classics), by Jack Kerouac.
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This is a first posting for me. Be honest with your critiques, I can take it. » Read...
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On No Stupid Questions, by Ben Jacobson: This was an interesting piece, I liked it. I especially liked
the idea of taking an old journal entry and making a poem out o... » Read more...
On Tell Me What You See, by James Barger: I have to say that this poem really spoke to me. The theme and
much of the description really struck a cord with me. I love t... » Read more...
On Resilience, by Vincent Slade: I'm not gonna lie, I really didn't like this much.
here we go
Fire let loose my breath and spoke dreams to me
This ... » Read more...
On A Question of Form, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: Interesting... This poem was actually educational for me, I
still have a lot to learn about poetry. I just finished looking u... » Read more...



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