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Your welcome. I'd keep the articles short--maybe just excerpts so they don't slow your narrative down. But you know that already!

what's your sci-fi story about? need any help getting past the plot hole? i'm quite the thinker

you are my hero, vrab.

V.
I would be honored if you immortalized Luigi by naming a character after him. All the Luigi's I have known were short, gentle, souls.
But who's to say a large mafia button man without a soul couldn't be Luigi Badmano?
Thanks for the welcome note.

Thanks for the crit, Mr V. Nice catch on the POV slip!

Thanks for the crit on a Hog Story. This really happened to my dad, and originally the language was just as he tells it. This story was published in a print magazine and they wanted me to tone it down a bit. I'm working on getting it back where I want it. Great suggestions. Thanks!

I see you have a second draft of chapter one of Santiago Bay. Do you want me to look at it again? Some folks just want fresh eyes, so I thought I'd ask.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review of Sons of Obsidian, Chapter Two. I appreciate the good advice--and yes, I'm going back to eradicate some of those dialogue tags

Glad I could help. Anything for a fellow Texan!