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On The Jeremy Files, Chapter 1: Sunlit Memories, by pikachufannumber1: I really really like this poem. It's written very
thoroughly - if that makes sense. All of the rhymes flow
to... » Read more...
On Can't Explain, by Rusty Shackleford: Ok!
I second the slightly confusing phrasing below
It couldn’t be done better in a movie, which this scene may or
may not ... » Read more...
On Can't Explain, by Rusty Shackleford: I don't really want to analyze this piece. In fact, I just
want to let the thoughts and feelings inspired by it lin... » Read more...
On Things My Sister Taught Me, by Carrie Griffin: I really enjoyed reading this. Although I think that
personally I might have pushed Essie down a well at some point in
... » Read more...
On Cooking Dinner Alone, by Lisette Wood: I think what Brian is talking about is the Umpf of the piece...
maybe...
Theres a lot of building a feeling of waiting and an... » Read more...
On Flock, by Mr. Croup:
There is supposedly an old tale told to children by their elders
in the city of Shein
You refer to the city as the "old cit... » Read more...
On Poem, by Rush Hannity: I really like the way this poem goes through various
stages of relationships, however I do think that the first
interlu... » Read more...
On Leaves, by Arday Urthona: I really like this poem. It reminds me of crinkly old
yellowed paper.... and an aging dictator who only meant good thin... » Read more...
On Hamm, by Manfred Tooley: First off, I'd
like to say that I really enjoyed this piece. I thought the
amount of details in it just further con... » Read more...
On Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz: Um, I didn't get this in its
original format. Also it's entirely possible that I the
only one who was utt... » Read more...