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On Fly Like a Bird...No, a Vampire.(Corny, I know), Chapter 1: Strange Encounters, by xXNightmarishXx: Plot
You had a good exposition; most of this chapter introduces
the reader into Delphi's world. I almost lau... » Read more...




