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I added a critique on your piece "My Body is a Cage'. I re read the critique after I pushed the submit button, then saw all thee spelling mistakes (all mine) - oh the shame - particularly that it's on a website such as this. Oh well. Sorry. I hope you'll get what I meant.
Thanks for your time and comments. ":My 19th century prose" = it's sort of a habit I can't break as my current trilogy (in the making) is set in the 15th century - a period I adore.
xo - love your name. I agree Alright doesnt feel complete, it's part of a larger story/chapter of a novel. And I need to make the ending, and the characters' change / outcome clear for a standalone. many thanks.you are kind reader. bg
Thanks for the crtq. Seriously, I had my manuscript open in iWork Pages, editing it as I read along. Very helpful!
Hey J, Thanks for taking a look at that piece. I really appreciate your comments. To be honest I'm not sure where that piece is heading, I'm trying to push myself to write enough to post two shorts a week. Thanks for the critique! I'll be incorporating your solutions asap!
Have a good one!
-m-
Have a good one!
-m-
Thanks for the crit, and sorry about the insomnia. Good luck with that.
Hey! Thanks for the crit on Ch. 2! It's definitely Romance, but it's YA Romance. So that makes a big difference. Instead of the complete tension filled two-character stories we read that fall exclusively to Romance it has to also fit the YA model ... which is more internal struggles on the part of the characters.
It's a balancing act I'll have to work across.
Hey thanks for the welcome 
Yeah that's where I first got the idea from, and since then the pen name has kinda stuck lol
Yeah that's where I first got the idea from, and since then the pen name has kinda stuck lol
trying to figure out which micro to submit to contest (I have 5 up right now) eg http://www.scribophile.com/authors/brian-george/works/picturing-the-ipad/
thanks! I was going for innocent all the way and the counselor is a kind of Christ figure (not a stalker) I have to make this clearer.
| Name: | Olivia |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | New Jersey |
| Birthday: | Jul 7, 1989 |
| Words Written: | 937 |
| Hottest Words: | world, torn, child, feet, edge, snow |
About xoFrore
| Occupation: | Convenience store clerk, college student. |
| About Me: | A tall, cynical anti-theist who enjoys long walks, root beer, writing and cats. |
| Interests: | Everything. Anything. Toss it at me. |
| Favorite Books: | The God Delusion by Richard Dawkins Bleak House by Charles Dickens A Haunted House and Other Short Stories by Virginia Woolf Lies My Teacher Told Me by James Loewen House of Leaves by Mark Danielewski Only Revolutions by Mark Danielewski Many, many more... |
| Favorite Movies: | Fight Club, Moulin Rouge, The Princess Bride, etc. |
| Favorite TV Shows: | South Park, The Colbert Report/The Daily Show, Maury, but I'm bad at watching things consistently. |
| Favorite Quotes: | ... Many, but I'm tired of filling this stuff in. Later on. |
| Loves: | You. |
| Hates: | Everyone else. |
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March 8

xoFrore wrote on Rhiannon DragonRaine's scratchpad.

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xoFrore wrote on Brian George's scratchpad.

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xoFrore commented on the Scribophile blog entry Natural, Only Better.
March 6

xoFrore posted My Body is a Cage.
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The Pharaoh did not know she was with child, and that the child was not his.
[submission for Flash Fiction Friday, and an accidental homage to Arcade Fire] Read →
[submission for Flash Fiction Friday, and an accidental homage to Arcade Fire] Read →
His ears were gone. So were his hands, his feet, his nose. The wolves had torn him apart. Read →
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On new beginnings competition, by peterjm: Opening CommentsHello peterjm!
I'm not a professional writer, and I'm not a connoiseur of any kind, so if I say somethi... Read →
On All Alright, by Brian George: Opening CommentsHello again! Flash Fiction Fridays are always an exhilerating time, eh? Let's see what you've cooked up for u... Read →
On Et Tu Brute, Chapter 1: Reawakening, by Stephanie Houck: Inline CritiqueThe ringing of the doorbell roused me. Not a very powerful opening line.I hated that doorbell. The... Read →
On Deoxyribonucleic Acid, by SM Carter: Opening CommentsHello, SM Carter! I have to admit, the title immediately caught my attention, being a bit of a science nerd a... Read →







