I added a critique on your piece "My Body is a Cage'. I re read the critique after I pushed the submit button, then saw all thee spelling mistakes (all mine) - oh the shame - particularly that it's on a website such as this. Oh well. Sorry. I hope you'll get what I meant.

Thanks for your time and comments. ":My 19th century prose" = it's sort of a habit I can't break as my current trilogy (in the making) is set in the 15th century - a period I adore.

xo - love your name. I agree Alright doesnt feel complete, it's part of a larger story/chapter of a novel. And I need to make the ending, and the characters' change / outcome clear for a standalone. many thanks.you are kind reader. bg

Thanks for the crtq. Seriously, I had my manuscript open in iWork Pages, editing it as I read along. Very helpful!

Hey J, Thanks for taking a look at that piece. I really appreciate your comments. To be honest I'm not sure where that piece is heading, I'm trying to push myself to write enough to post two shorts a week. Thanks for the critique! I'll be incorporating your solutions asap!
Have a good one!
-m-

Thanks for the crit, and sorry about the insomnia. Good luck with that.

Hey! Thanks for the crit on Ch. 2! It's definitely Romance, but it's YA Romance. So that makes a big difference. Instead of the complete tension filled two-character stories we read that fall exclusively to Romance it has to also fit the YA model ... which is more internal struggles on the part of the characters. It's a balancing act I'll have to work across.

Hey thanks for the welcome
Yeah that's where I first got the idea from, and since then the pen name has kinda stuck lol

trying to figure out which micro to submit to contest (I have 5 up right now) eg http://www.scribophile.com/authors/brian-george/works/picturing-the-ipad/

thanks! I was going for innocent all the way and the counselor is a kind of Christ figure (not a stalker) I have to make this clearer.