Happy belated birthday to you, as well

Thanks for that very helpful critique! I'd have to say you pretty much got it right in your interpretation

it's on there! i have some obligations ahead of you, but i'll get there.

hi--me, again.
thanks for critiquing my 'breath of life' story and for your comments on my 'rose rising' story! i feel flush with gratitude, and excited to get back to work on these--i sincerely appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think. you rock!

hi, carole--
thanks so much for your encouraging comments about my rose rising chapter!! you've made my night.
thanks also for adding me to your favorites--!

Hi, this is Jeanie,, Dreamshaser,, You seem like a very deep and wonderful person.. I am hopin to read more of your works.. and Thanks.. Welcom to SC, but beware of the hidden costs..

hello carole-- Thank you so muc for the new review of Musings!
I appreciate your time, and thank you for the suggestions on commas. I'm glad you enjoyed it; I too prefer the first person angle. I am really working on adding detail without confusion and without infodumping. Glad to hear I'm succeeding!
~Fainne

Hi Carole,
Thank you so much for your kind words regarding my poem. I really appreciate it! Have a blessed day!

Thanks for your comment on Immortal Child I hope you enjoyed reading it, however unsettling it was!

Have a great day!

HI, Xvermonter! I'm working on Immortal Child to be submitted to the publishers. I hope they will accept it - my goal is to get it accepted & possibly published before I finish college.

I see you have a birthday coming up! Happy Happy Birthday!

Any time

hello again-- please read and critique musings-- i made some major edits to the storyline and wish to know the effect. thanks!
~Fainne

hello carol brier-
thanks for the review of musings! i can see clearly now the thing you pointed out, which i could not see before.
something to consider: i have a longer work called Island Conspiracy that you might be interested in, maybe you could stop by and take a look at that??? just a thought. thanks again!
~Fainne

Hi! Thank you for your comment on "When Friends Return." As you have requested, I have expanded the story a little. While the story itself is fiction, what I added isn't. I hope you enjoy it!

Thank you for your heart felt comments regarding "good-bye papa"

Louise