On Oil and Water, by Jase Jayne:  Wow! I realy liked your memoir. It was very relatable to me. My parents got divorced before I could remember them being... » Read more...

On Blue Tide, by Alex Hinkley:  Hey, I'm back! The Blue Tide members looked up to Lieutenant Dorion believing he was extremely well trained during... » Read more...

On The Alarm, by Phedre: Hey, my name is Alexis. I really like the style of your narritive. Its really cute. I think that the explanation at the be... » Read more...

On Blue Tide, by Alex Hinkley:   Sidney was a robust man that could be described in only two words: greedy and jovial.   I think instead of havin... » Read more...

On Pop Pop, by Joshua Burgess:  Hey, My name's Alexis, and I would just like to start off by saying that I'm not the most experienced writer, s... » Read more...

On Death Notes, by Laos D Feng: Opening I liked the opening. You set the scene well, but didn't put too much description. I also liked how he describes h... » Read more...