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On Darlings, by K. McCrae: Given your constraint, I hereby withdraw a large proportion of
my critique. But I STILL don't like the ending.
And ... » Read more...
On Polished, by Zed Hensleigh: Meghan: "Anything like a painting?" is supposed to be a
part of the third stanza. I messed with the formatting, a... » Read more...
On Darlings, by K. McCrae: It was an easy read, and I don't mean this in terms of
simplicity. As I've said before, your voice carries the
... » Read more...
On Mama's Tears, by Shelbia Chandler: I like this poem, but right now I'm going to focus on metre
because this piece has a serious problem with it. Now I... » Read more...
On The Writing Life, by Ben Jacobson: To start, this piece is excellent. The realism of its
absurdity entices many smiles and drags the reader along.
H... » Read more...
On Hootenanny!, by K. McCrae: Well, I suppose it's just in my nature to look for ironic,
passive aggressive behavior. XD
But truthfully, I THOUGH... » Read more...
On Hootenanny!, by K. McCrae: I am quite impressed with your short fiction, Ms. Meghan.
You are able to generate believable characters in a short
tim... » Read more...
On Coffee, by K. McCrae: Very enjoyable. My only question is why Jean is interested
in Frank?
... » Read more...
On In A Fish Bowl With A Three-Second Memory Span, by Zacchary Tailor: Definitely very interesting, Mr. Tailor. The obvious irony
of a fish's thinking about lack of thought and memory is... » Read more...
On Soundless Self-Indulgence, by Zed Hensleigh:
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Having many problems with the English language myself, I
definitely enjoyed this. It was fun, in a mockin... » Read more...
On Red Shirt, by Shane Gannaway: Opening Comments
Poetry is an exceptionally hard subject to critique. The
needs and expressions of the author can be s... » Read more...