new poem. i tried to write a sonnet. i think i did it right. comments and critiques welcome.

Hello, everyone - sorry that I have not posted in a long time! Could anyone comment on any of my stories on this circle (Just click See All and you should see a bunch of works by me)? Thanks.

thank you very much. 

 Bright and early (seriously, I don't know about early; not a morning person), I'll read your story, Eli. It's on my list anyway, I just have to find it. Expect me on the morrow!