I'm shooting for a literary short story with this I want to eventually send it out to magazines, so your feedback about minor details or overall tone and word usage would be greatly appreciated. You should tell me if I'm being over(t)ly flash... » Read...

This is a short piece I have been chipping away at for a long time. Genre-wise, I guess it falls into the 'literary fiction' category, but you be the judge. It is what it says it is: A rainy day.

As far at critiques go, I like to... » Read...

Retired female professor in her mid-sixties having a hard time choosing which four T shirts to buy in a college bookstore » Read...

I would like to turn this into something bigger...a tribute to the advice that I have been given from some memorable characters. » Read...

I won a Writing.com contest with this a few years back, but I always wanted help to expand it into a longer story. Really I just needed some accountability to improve it. If you're game, I'd appreciated any input. Thanks. » Read...