Please comment on the following poems:

To those who gave their two cents on "Sad woman's Blues" I just wanna thank you and I'm going through my head and storage boxes of old poems and songs to publish for you guys and I again thank you for your time to read my work and give whatever stars you had in mind. Peace. 

thanks for the invitation!  i've never been in a circle before (im still really new to scribophile).  

That sounds cool Phedre. I've been thinking about going to some writing retreats for some time now. I think it's a wonderful idea. My understanding is that you don't have to have a finished manuscript,  only part of it, which is why the retreat is there. To give you a better perspective on your idea as a novel, if its good enough to be considered, or if you should just start from scratch.

I go to local poetry readings and work shops. Their a good way to meet and greet and share my recent poetry.

Lately, I've been taking some classes on grammar and word expansion. I figure if poetry is my passion, I should know what I'm doing, right?

Well, good luck. I hope you write a masterpiece.