i wrote a new poem. critiques would be great. 

 right now, i'm working on a series of poems that will come together as a novella. i will post it as soon as i finish it up. this will be the first time i've tried to do this so critiques would be appreciated.

Hey, thanks for the invite guys! I hope you'll look forward to some more things I'll post when I get some more points

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Attention to all! The story, The Even Darker Side of Revenge has been canceled until further notice. I am now publishing a story now for people on this circle to see on either this Thursday or Friday called And So The Lion Fell In Love With The Lamb! It is currently a working title and it has not been determined if it will be a short story or a chapterless novella that I plan on getting published this Summer! I hope that you are all ready to see it sometime soon!