i wrote a new poem. critiques would be great. 

 right now, i'm working on a series of poems that will come together as a novella. i will post it as soon as i finish it up. this will be the first time i've tried to do this so critiques would be appreciated.

Hey, thanks for the invite guys! I hope you'll look forward to some more things I'll post when I get some more points

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Attention to all! The story, The Even Darker Side of Revenge has been canceled until further notice. I am now publishing a story now for people on this circle to see on either this Thursday or Friday called And So The Lion Fell In Love With The Lamb! It is currently a working title and it has not been determined if it will be a short story or a chapterless novella that I plan on getting published this Summer! I hope that you are all ready to see it sometime soon! 

Also an update for everyone on this circle. Anyone thinking about posting a work and its plot on a Saturday can contact me on my scratchpad. And also, I am sad to announce that a work that I may sometime in the future do called The Even Darker Side of Revenge will not be on this circle, but hopefully, you all can get to comment on it on the home page.

Hello, Kathleen! You do not have to flesh it out into a novella, because it says in the message of the circle that you can write 1501 words and up. That means anything over 1501 like 5000 or 7700, so you do not have to worry about cutting your novel down. I wish you good luck in writing your story for a pubisher.  And also Samantha Mccord, you are welcome and feel free to comment upon the story I have below. And for everyone on this circle, I need the all of you to read The Passions of a Formerly Lovestruck, Black Winged But Tempted Kind of Angel: Sinclair's Story because I am entering it into a short story contest. So I hope that you give me great comments and many great votes. Also, Kathleen, remember Heart of Ice? I will take a break from it, to do my other short story.

 Thanks for the invite to the circle

 Hey All

Thanks for the invite to the circle.  Based on Ariandne's message above, I copied my most recent "Guilty Love" to the circle eventhough it is 7,700 words because I am either trying to shorten it or flesh it out into a novel.  I am looking for critical feedback on the story.  I am working with an editor who is interested in publication, but not at its current length.  I need to either get it down to 2500-3000 words to flesh it out into a full fledged novella/novel (either).  For anyone that has the time, I would love the feedback.   Thanks all!

 Hello, Richard! Thanks for coming into the Romance Writers Saturdays. Also, there is an update that for anyone who wanted to enter the february contest can post a work based on romance here, only this time, you do not have a word restriction of 2,000 to 4,000 words per story. The work can be poetry, flash fiction, a play, a short story that for fun or if you want to publish it into a book  or a short or long chapter of a novel that you want to publish soon.